Personal Narrative

My narrative is about the first ever water skiing and how I could do anything if I put my mind to it. I think I am doing a great job using vivid detail in my writing but also learning a lot about this new form of writing. Some advice I could use is that sentence fluency and the dialogue in my writing. This experience that I am writing about had way more depth and vivid detail than I had remembered. Overall the narrative is going great but could I could use some advice on making it better.

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